#6"An unexpected adventure"

            I was in a dark, closed room. It was so small that I can't even lie down on the floor. In an instant, I heard a soft and whispering voices coming from outside. Voices from the people who seemed to be expecting something. I rapidly held the silver doorknob, trying to unlock the door. But then, it doesn't work a bit. I tried the second time but nothing changes. I can feel my sweat dropping. My hands were cold. I felt the fast beating of my heart. I tried the third time by putting my full force, fortunately, the door opened. I found myself in a narrow hallway which is full of lights. The rays was striking my eyes but then it was beautiful. The lights was shining and shimmering. As I walked slowly through the hallway, I heard the soft voices louder and louder until I was in front of a big, classy door. It was intricately designed and carved of flowers. As I was gently opening the door, the voices stopped. Just then, there were balloons flying, hands clapping, loud shouts saying,
                                                     "Happy Birthday Dor!"
           It was then I remembered, it was my 16th birthday. And there they are my loving family and friends, in front of me holding their lovely-wrapped presents. It was then an unforgettable birthday, yet an adventure I must say.

Video commentary

an inspiring video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wOlTdkYXuzE&feature=youtu.be

1. What is the main message of the video?

"If you fall seven times, stand up eight!" This is exactly the message of the video. Even if you fall many times, don't give up. You must have the courage and strength to stand up and see that everything in this world is possible as long as you have the faith.

2. Are you inspired by it? Why or why not?

Yes, because sometimes I am pessimistic. I think that I can't do this, that.. But as I watch the video again and again, it gives me the determination to face life, deal with it and be happy with it.

3. How can you become an inspiration for others too?

I can become an inspiration for others by simply working first on myself. As I live my life in a right way, I think I can influence other people to be like me. Also, I will share to others what I learn in this world. Lastly, I'll tell them to have faith in Him and everything will follow.

DEFINITION WRITING (discipline)

Discipline

            Training expected to produce a specific character or pattern of behavior, especially training that produces    moral or mental improvement. (Source: www.thefreedictionary.com)

               

In other words, discipline is a set of rules or methods expected to produce a controlled and correct behavior.

In brief, discipline is a training to produce good attitude.

In short, discipline is a training.

In simpler terms, discipline means a teaching to correct one's character.

That is, discipline is a systematic method to obtain obedience.

To put it differently, discipline is a state of order to correct or train.

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